來源:網絡資源 作者:中考網編輯 2025-04-14 22:29:04
在2024年“兩會”上,教育部提出要著力解決“小眼鏡”、“小胖墩”和學生心理健康問題。為響應號召,某英文網站開設了“樹洞傾述”專欄,并在近期收到了一些求助郵件。請你結合“兩會”精神,就收集到的一至兩個典型問題提出相關建議,幫助他們解決煩惱,快樂成長。
要求:
1. 80-120詞;
2. 文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考信息:It’s common for us to have trouble.
We have received some help emails recently. Shortsightedness is one of the typical problems. For students who are short-sighted, they shouldn’t read books or magazines for too long. They can stop for a while to let their eyes have a rest. Then, they shouldn’t read books under strong lights or weak lights. Obesity is another typical problem. Some students are too fat. Obesity can lead to a number of serious health problems, including heart disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. It’s important to make healthy food choices. This means eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, and avoiding processed and high-fat foods. In addition to making healthy food choices, it’s important to take more exercise.
It’s common for us to have trouble. I hope the above suggestions can be helpful.
【詳解】
[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 時態:時態以“一般現在時”為主;
③ 提示:根據所給提示完成寫作,注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖;
第二步,就收集到的一至兩個典型問題提出相關建議;
第三步,書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
① shortsightedness 近視
② typical 典型的
③ short-sighted 近視的
④ have a rest 休息一下
⑤ obesity 肥胖
⑥ a number of 許多的
⑦ in addition to 除了
[高分句型]
It’s important to make healthy food choices. (it作形式主語)
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